A re-post for those LADIES who like poetry,, by Tom comments welcome, I will reply with pic and :)?

Here is a cool Poem,,, A novice Poet I become, an experienced soul I am,, comments and "your" thoughts on how you felt when reading.





Color my World"





Clear blue skies, Palm Trees that blow whispers in night,


Oceans green blue and gray, caps of enchanting white,


Sands of spattered cream, shells that endlessly shine,


Lady Godiva appears, my vision of goddess is consigned.





To this picture of beauty in front of me, oh the joy I feel,


Naked brushstrokes flow freely, my soul begins to heal.


You color my world, bedroom eyes matching the calming sea,


Mesmerized by your movements, you set my inhibitions free.


Mountains they rise, the backdrop of this place quiet, serene,


My heart on fire, you color my world, your soul, pristine.


Completing the cycle, the cycle of love, just you and me...











Lay with me now, and.... "Color my World Tom ,, 10/07

A re-post for those LADIES who like poetry,, by Tom comments welcome, I will reply with pic and :)?
that's actually really beautiful.





Nice work.





If you are interested, I have posted a couple of my pieces as well. I always welcom feedback and criticsm.





Keep doing what u do, as you do it well.
Reply:"Color my world" is a song by Chicago.








And so is "Just you and Me" ...the last words of this "Poem"....











Plagiarizer!
Reply:I think it is B-E-A-utiful! Keep up the wonderful work Tom!