Sunday, May 16, 2010

A day to celebrate LADIES a poem of affection,, thoughts welcomed?

A novice Poet I become, an experienced soul I am,, comments and "your" thoughts on how you felt when reading.





Color my World"





Clear blue skies, Palm Trees that blow whispers in night,


Oceans green blue and gray, caps of enchanting white,


Sands of spattered cream, shells that endlessly shine,


Lady Godiva appears, my vision of goddess is consigned.





To this picture of beauty in front of me, oh the joy I feel,


Naked brushstrokes flow freely, my soul begins to heal.


You color my world, bedroom eyes matching the calming sea,


Mesmerized by your movements, you set my inhibitions free.


Mountains they rise, the backdrop of this place quiet, serene,


My heart on fire, you color my world, your soul, pristine.


Completing the cycle, the cycle of love, just you and me...











Lay with me now, and.... "Color my World"

A day to celebrate LADIES a poem of affection,, thoughts welcomed?
dang... who'd you write that for? lol
Reply:Wow I have read alot of your poems and this is one of the best ones. Keep up the good work I like them alot. You are surely talented. Oh and what color would you color your world? Im thinking bre colored.LOL just playing with you. I have to I just can't help it.LOL
Reply:I liked it


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